Showing posts with label LionLambForever. Show all posts
Showing posts with label LionLambForever. Show all posts

Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Forever My Love by LionLambForever

Jasper and Edward have been best friends many, many years, but as the story opens, Jasper reveals two major secrets to Edward. 1. Jasper is dying. 2. Bella is not only Jasper's wife, but also his slave. Edward is at a loss for words learning of not only his best friend's impending death, but also of Jasper and Bella's involvement in the world of BDSM and Shibari, which is Japanese Rope bondage.

Realizing what he's dumped into his best friend's lap, Jasper invites Edward to dinner the next night, but only after asking Edward to move in with he and Bella, so Jasper can train him to be Bella's Master.

Why is Jasper adamant that Edward do this? Will Edward agree? Will there be FUCKHOT lemons including our favorite threesome? You'll only find out the answers to these questions, if you read Forever My Love. Don't forget to leave LionLambForever some love and tell them that TwiSlash Unveiled sent you.

Do y'all remember this story? It was a rec here at TwiSlash Unveiled several months ago and then all of a sudden it just disappeared. I loved the story, as did my peen and a lot of the TU readers but alas, we were duped. It was a plagiarized story and the author got caught in the web of deceit. I've not posted anything about it until now, because while I was told it was plagiarized I was never able to find the original. Well, thanks to DefinatelyStaying, we now know where to find the rest of the REAL story.


You can get Tymber Dalton's The Reluctant Dom for your Kindle on Amazon.com or you can go right to the source, Lyrical Press.

We here at TwiSlash Unveiled apologize to Tymber Dalton and our readers for recommending Forever My Love. However, I hope that by rec'ing the REAL book and author here that those of you that loved the story will give the author her due and purchase a copy of her beautiful book.

Thanks ever so much,
Whitlock's Girl

Thursday, August 27, 2009

Read, Rate & Review~Thursday, August 27th!

Welcome to TwiSlash Unveiled!

We really appreciate you coming back week after week to see us. Every Thursday, The Master and I try to bring you stories that will knock your socks off. We hope you enjoy this week's story. It's a secret craving and seriously had our secret parts humming.

PSST!
There are a fuckton load of announcements after the review.
Please check them out. Thanks!


And...without further ado, we bring to you...


Don't Let Me Go
by LionLambForever

SUMMARY:
Pulled from the raging inferno of Volterra, the recently widowed Isabella Newton has hit rock bottom and is the prime suspect in the arson. Worse, her past has come back to haunt her. When the firefighters who rescued her show up at her house, all she can do is cling to them and revel in their tender care. Edward and Emmett believe in her innocence and offer a gentle dominance that nurtures her lonely heart. But can this inexperienced, natural submissive gain their love forever, or are they like the other men in her past who’ve wanted to own her? AH/AU Ed/B/Em


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Val, aka The Master:

Once again, we are straying, or trying to, from our comfortable box. Course, my box is slightly-okay, a LOT smaller-than Donna's, but regardless we are expanding our tastes, for lack of a better word. We decided to look for a yummy poly this week, but when all the slash ones didn't wet our appetite, Donna came across a poly BDSM goodie for us to munch on. I admit, I cringed when she said it was Edward/Bella and Emmett. Yes, my hard limit flashed before my eyes and I was about so say "NO", when she told me there was no slash between E/Em. After a huge sigh of relief, I began.

"Don't Let Me Go" by LionLambForver begins with a large dose of action when Bella is caught in a night club fire and is rescued by Emmett and Edward, firefighters. Bella is a widow, and a natural submissive, who was at the club investigating her husband's death. At first, she is accused of setting the fire, but is quickly cleared by Detective Jasper (YAY). Both Edward and Emmett feel an immediate connection, attraction, to her, to the extent of checking on her later that night after they are done working. They take care of her, bathing her and spending the night in her bed. They are gone the next morning, but not before cooking her breakfast and leaving her a note. The next time they are together, Edward and Emmett tell her they are Doms and had frequented the night club-which specialized in Dom/sub entertainment. Bella eventually tells them of her background, her childhood and marriage, informing them of Jacob, a man she was betrothed to at fifteen years old. Edward and Emmett both want to be her Dom, apparently, they are quite good at sharing and have the desire to share Bella. She agrees and some mind-blowing sex ensues.

The thing I enjoyed the most about this story is quite odd actually. Yes, the smut was good-well written, hot and sexy, but I admired the author's ability to tell the story in third-person pov. This is not, in my opinion, an easy task to do. I think it is more difficult to draw a reader in when they can't get into the story teller's head. However, LionLambForever manages to suck us in anyway-with detailed descriptions of emotions, lengthy chapters and of course smut. Even though we don't hear, or read, Edward thinking how tight Bella is, we know it anyway from the descriptions given and dialogue spoken. I have only read two other third-person povs (both by the same author) and am amazed every chapter I read how the story develops even with no real "voice."

I recommend "Don't Let Me Go" for a nice little non-slash poly with some Edward/Emmett love. The author has developed an interesting side plot, has lovely smut scenes and it is long enough to give you time to enjoy and get to know the characters. Besides, who can resist Edward and Emmett in fireman's gear-can anyone say "Firefighter Calendar?" Mmmm...Edward as Mr. June coming right up!

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Donna aka Whitlock's Girl

*GIGGLES* I'm sorry! My brain is in the gutter. It's fucking 2am on Thursday morning and Val just said "box", "munch", "yummy" and "appetite in one fucking paragraph. OH, FUCK IT! Her entire first paragraph cracked my shit up and I'm still trying, two hours later, to get myself under control. Yep, it probably won't happen so you'll just have to deal. Sorry.

Anyway, I'm supposed to be gushing (*giggles* I said gushing!) over LionLambForever's fuckawesome story Don't Let Me Go so, let's get back to that.

You probably recognize LionLambForever from a few weeks back when I recommended Forever My Love as a Secret Craving. Well, just as with Forever My Love, Don't Let Me Go showcases Bella (Lucky bitch! Oh shut it. You know you're thinking the same fucking thing) with two hot ass TwiGuys, only this time she gets sandwiched between Emmett and Edward, instead of Jasper and Edward. (Either way the chick just hit the fucking lottery.)

Like Val said, the sex is fucking awesome. Seriously, grab the toy box, spread that towel under you and say "FUCK IT" to the panties because there's just no need adding to the laundry pile, in my opinion.

But the smut isn't the only thing that drew me into this story. It's the authors' voices. They peg, oops, nail...OH SWEET JESUS! How come all my verbs are coming off as sexual innuendos? Anyway. The authors' manage to capture Emmett, Edward and Bella nearly flawlessly and they do it all in the 3rd person POV. Not an easy feat.

I'm with Val. I want the boys in their turnouts and carrying a hose!

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Well, we loved it! Now, we want to hear what you all thought about it, so leave comments here or on the Twilighted thread.


Don't forget about tomorrow's Twi Me Up with DefinatelyStaying. She'll be here with a BDSM question from our pervy secret cravings readers. You won't want to miss it.


Speaking of BDSM and the darker side of the bed, Whitlock's Girl has been asked to help guest judge the Les Femmes Noires contest. A Competiton for One Shot Stories exploring the Darkside of the female characters of Twilight. Click here for the rules.

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TwiSlash Unveiled and our Femme Slash contest was featured on The Fornication Station this week for their MisMatched Mondays column. Clickity click on over there and check out what those girls have up their sleeves.

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Also, don't forget about TwiSlash Unveiled's One Shot contest. The deadline for casting your Femme Slash votes is August 31th. For more information, click the link on the top right hand side of the page, or shoot us an email to twislash@gmail.com. We'll be happy to answer any questions you might have.



If Femme Slash just wasn't your thing, then sharpen those pencils or do your finger exercises and take a page out of some of our favorite authors' books and try your hand at the upcoming Poly Slash contest. "Where three or more is never a crowd." The link for the rules and the contest's important dates can be found by clicking the contest rules link at the top of the blog.


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Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Tuesday's Best~July 21st, 2009

Welcome to TwiSlash Unveiled

Tuesday's are for the best slash stories we can find and this Tuesday is no different. The remaining three TwiSlash girls are here to present you with a few FUCKAWESOME tales that will get your heart to sing and your juices to flow.

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Donna's Girly Action of the week...

by AHelm

This week I chose a story that my good friend and FUCKAWESOME beta, Naelany recommended to me. "Phoenix" stars Rose Hale, a young woman raised by a bigoted father and a doormat for a mother. She's denied herself for too long. From the moment she received her very first kiss, Rose knew she was into girls, but because of the hate lessons taught to her by her father, she runs from her first kiss, a girl named Tanya, tears streaming down her face.

She meets a great guy, one her parents approve of that she tells herself she loves, but she still thinks of Tanya. When he finds out, an argument ensues and her mother and father find out. She lies, not once but twice, telling Royce that it was no big deal and then to her father about the girl's kiss. Not long afterward her father throws her from the house because she finally admits that she's a lesbian.

Rose never looks back, but as she exorcises the past, wanting to move on, she meets Alice, at tattoo artist. Rose goes to Alice to remove the tattoo she'd had done with Royce, wanting all the reminders gone. She doesn't count on her reaction to Alice. Which is swift and intense starting with Rose's first glimpse at Alice in a painting done by Edward.

AHelm wrote "Phoenix" for the Tattward & Inkella contest, and it's fabulous! Leave her some love.

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The Master brings you...

by treee

Occasionally, you come across a story that finds you, reaching out through the depths of FFnet to snag you and drag into its subversive little world. This is exactly what “Passion Fruit” by treee did to me. I cannot I recall the last time a story filled me with wonder and amazement as much and as quickly as this one did. I am not sure where to being describing the wonderful tale that is “Passion Fruit”.

The first few paragraphs suck you in with curiosity. Who is the man? Who is the slender boy? Are they more than casual lovers? By the end of the first chapter, we learn that the ‘effeminate boy’ is fifteen-year old orphaned Edward and he is a prostitute for Aro in 1800’s France. Edward’s next john is James, who excites and terrifies him at the same time. James takes Edward home, to sample the fruit of Edward’ s body, and what follows is an erotic night with the mysterious James, whose cold, hard skin, but gentle touch fascinates Edward. I am not sure I have ever enjoyed a scene with James as much as I did when he was with Edward. While he is paying for Edward’s services, he treats him with respect and gentle touches. I did not get nearly as squeamish about them together as I thought I might; not because of the age difference but because it was James. Even Edward confesses to never experiencing something so erotic in his short life.

While this is a Jasper and Edward story, Jasper does not appear until the very end of chapter three, but the wait is worth it, trust me. Alice is Edward’s younger sister, and is also one of Aro’s employees. She has the curious ability to see the future, often telling, or warning in some cases, Edward of his next job and exactly how long it will last. Edward has the ability to read minds, making him wonderfully apt at his job, allowing him to service his customers by knowing exactly what they want. This talent has made him the most requested charges of Aro’s brothel.

This story is filled with beautiful, poetic and erotic writing. What amazes me more than anything about this story is the young age of the author, tree. For such a tender age, barely older than Edward himself, Treee has a wonderful grasp on her characters. She has chosen a unique setting, one I have never seen before in Twilight fanfiction, and put young Edward into a controversial lifestyle and we haven’t even gotten to Jasper yet. Plus, you add in the sixth sense abilities of Edward and Alice, the strange circumstances surrounding the disappearance of their parents, along with the hints that James is a vampire and you have one of the most unique and interesting stories I have ever read. If you are looking for something different, a bit off the beaten path of typical slash stories, I recommend giving “Passion Fruit” a shot; I don’t think you will be sorry you decided to taste this forbidden fruit.

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Rosella's Poly Pick....

by sirenastarot


This weeks poly slash rec features Alice, Bella and Jasper. Some of you may have read this before since it was part of a KittenMischief Contest, but I figured I may as well recommend this for those of you who haven't had a chance to read it.

Sirenastarot has produced a very well-written story that peaked my interest from the very beginning. Alice and Bella are a couple who are out and about enjoying a day at the fair when they get a reading from a psychic. This psychic tells Bella she will find her "King of Cups" soon, and has Alice a bit nervous and weary because of it. Not long after, Bella stumbles her way into the arms of her "King of Cups", a man by the name of Jasper.

All three hit it off immediately and end up making their way to Jasper's house for a bit of a wrestle & romp. (<-- don't ask why I decided to refer to it that way. LOL) The lemon that follows is sultry as hell, and only fuels my obsession with Jasper. Having Alice and Bella lip locking and groping at every corner also helps trigger the heat you will no doubt feel as you read this. If this sounds like a pairing you'd like to see, then head on over and make sure to give Sirenastarot some love and support. I promise you'll get the warm and tingly feeling that we all lust after when we read these fabulous little smutty slash one-shots.

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TwiSlash's Secret Craving...

by LionLambForever


This week, TwiSlash Unveiled reveals to you "Forever My Love" for you secret craving fantasies. We give fair warning, this story requires a towel. One that you can use to dry your tears. The three chapters draw you in and squeeze your heart.

Jasper and Edward have been best friends many, many years, but as the story opens, Jasper reveals two major secrets to Edward. 1. Jasper is dying. 2. Bella is not only Jasper's wife, but also his slave. Edward is at a loss for words learning of not only his best friend's impending death, but also of Jasper and Bella's involvement in the world of BDSM and Shibari, which is Japanese Rope bondage.

Realizing what he's dumped into his best friend's lap, Jasper invites Edward to dinner the next night, but only after asking Edward to move in with he and Bella, so Jasper can train him to be Bella's Master.

Why is Jasper adamant that Edward do this? Will Edward agree? Will there be FUCKHOT lemons including our favorite threesome? You'll only find out the answers to these questions, if you read Forever My Love. Don't forget to leave LionLambForever some love and tell them that TwiSlash Unveiled sent you.

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So, there you have it. Another Tuesday filled with TwiSlash Unveiled's picks of the week. Hope you remembered your towel. Stay tuned until Thursday for when Rosella and The Master bring you Thursday's Read, Rate and Review. They have an absolutely fabulous story lined up for you.

Also, don't forget about TwiSlash Unveiled's One Shot contest. The deadline for your FemSlash story submissions is August 15th. For more information, click the link on the top right hand side of the page, or shoot us an email to twislash@gmail.com. We'll be happy to answer any questions you might have.