Welcome to TwiSlash Unveiled
First off, we need to send Get Well Soon wishes to one of our Southern Belles. Cella is very ill. So, her Secret Craving will just have to remain a secret this week, because she's too ill to drag herself to the computer. Secretly, I think she's lying in bed tearing up that new toy the peen just bought her, but don't tell her I said so.
Get Well Soon, Cella! We miss you!
Now, let's get down to business. Tuesday's are for the best slash stories we can find and this Tuesday is no different. The remaining three TwiSlash girls are here to present you with a few FUCKAWESOME tales that will get your heart to sing and your juices to flow.
Donna's Girly Action of the week...
In my weekly search through the muck to find y'all a fuck-tabulous lesbian love story I just happened to stumble across this little gem of a story. "After Dusk" is only three chapters long, but it has the potential to be epic.
"After Dusk" is a post-Breaking Dawn story that features Alice as the object of Leah's imprint. The two try to deny their feelings, because having been the subject of heartache, Leah doesn't want to be the 'homewrecker' and Alice doesn't want to hurt Jasper. As Stephenie Meyer says, "it's hard to resist that kind of devotion" and eventually Jasper asks Alice for a divorce.
I read the three chapters of "After Dusk" so quickly that I can only describe it as literally devouringly this story. I had to go back and re-read it, not once, but twice, because I was certain I missed a flaw or something. Something that would detract from it's awesomeness. I hadn't. It's beautifully written, the plot is spot on and totally unique.
There have been four post-Breaking Dawn stories that have piqued my interest; "The Tie That Binds", "You Wanted More", "When You're Broken", and now, "After Dusk". Leah is featured in the last two and this one grabbed my heart and it's just three freaking chapters.
While there's no smexin, yet, there are some fabulous kisses shared between Leah and Alice. So, give awriterscorned some time, because I'm sure she didn't rate "After Dusk" M for nothing.
The Master brings you...
“Closer to God” was actually recommended to me by a fellow slash fan about two weeks ago, I immediately bookmarked it and placed it in my “blog slash to read” folder. Since then, a few more have sent it my way, only to have me reply, ‘yeah, I have it on my to-read list already’. Well, I finally sat down, read it, and was pleasantly surprised. After a long day, I was feeling a bit negative in general and thought that a little Jasper and Edward slash might just do the trick to bring me out of my funk and “Closer to God” did just that.
Edward is in college, has come out to family and friends, but has very limited physical experiences with men. He has convinced himself that he is fine alone, instead concentrating on his studies. Alice is his best friend, adopted sister and confidant that forces him to attend parties to at least be somewhat social. Edward’s frustration with these parties grows, but he always makes an appearance because he cannot deny Alice anything. It is at one of these parties that Edward’s life changes almost immediately when tall, blonde, tattooed Jasper walks into the room. They are introduced by Alice and strike up a conversation, during which Edward is constantly attempting to hide his hard on from Jasper. At first, Edward has no idea if Jasper is straight or gay, only that he is sexy as hell. When Jasper has to leave, he leans over Edward, whispers in his ear that next time maybe he can take care of Edward’s ‘problem’, as he runs his hand up Edward’s erection. Over the next few days, when Edward is not debating on whether or not to call Jasper, he is masturbating to Jasper induced fantasies. He finally decides to call, thinking one night of sex with Jasper will work him out of Edward’s system. However, Edward soon realizes that one night with Jasper is definitely not going to be enough to satisfy anything.
This story is more fluff than angst, which given my mood for the day, was perfect! So far, there has been very little drama, only small conflicts and a lot of hot sex between these two beautiful boys. I do think dannie7786 will work in some more angst, but feel this story will mostly be a light romance filled with great sex. I have found a few small issues with the story, such as a slight continuity problem, but nothing major enough to distract me from enjoying a lovely tale of Edward and Jasper meeting, fucking and falling in love. I would definitely add this story to your ‘to read’ list, and try not to wait as long as I did before reading it!
Rosella's Poly Pick....
This one-shot is so well written and has a very developed plot as well, but what else would we expect from starfish422? I'm sure most of you are familiar with her story "Over The Top" and know what an amazing author she is. Honestly, I'd like to see her turn this into a full story as well.
It all starts back in 1918 when Edward is sick with the Spanish Influenza. Carlisle is in turmoil as Edward's days are numbered. Carlisle feels such a deep connection with this 'beautiful boy' that he convinces himself that "an eternity of service to the human race" is a rational enough reason to take him, turn him, and make him his.
The two vampires spend some time together as a couple, enjoying the easy companionship. Until one day they are out hunting and come across another vampire who's depressing suicidal thoughts have Edward concerned. Edward calls to this lonely vampire, letting him know they will not hurt him and that they can show him a better life, one without violence. Of course, this vampire is none other than Jasper Whitlock.
Jasper moves in with them and over the months Edward & Carlisle get to know him and help him discover a better way to 'live'. Jasper also knows that the two are a couple, and keeps his distance when they are in a coupling mood. Eventually, the lust and love he feels coming from them is overwhelming and he can't keep away any longer, so he asks if he can join them.
This is the point where you stop to make sure you have a towel ready. The sexin' described is so good. It's passionate, sensual, steamy and all kinds of tantalizing. The bond strengthens between the three of them into something poetic and beautiful. Starfish422 truly has a gift and she's sharing it with us all, so take advantage of that and read this beautifully erotic tale.
So, there you have it. Another Tuesday filled with TwiSlash Unveiled's picks of the week. Hope you remembered your towel.
Stay tuned until Thursday for Donna and the Master's turn at Thursday's Read, Rate and Review. They have an absolutely fabulous story lined up for you.
Also, don't forget about TwiSlash Unveiled's One Shot contest. The deadline for your FemSlash story submissions is August 15th. For more information, click the link on the top righthand side of the page, or shoot us an email to firstname.lastname@example.org. We'll be happy to answer any questions you might have.